Writing in the Midst of Chaos

Grab a coffee, folks. This is a long post.

This year, I stepped away from writing to handle some other stuff, and also to gain clarity on what it meant, or rather, means, to be an author in these crazy, AI days. So much has changed.

The publishing industry seldom supports full-time authorship. But that’s what I want. I’m also happy as an independent author, but that choice is bringing new challenges.

Amazon has changed book discoverability. AI-generated books are avalanching into the kindle store, and elsewhere. Even the digital library apps, like Libby and Hoopla, are struggling with the AI deluge.

How do I get my books, and especially my new books, noticed? Well, that’s a puzzle I’m still working on. What I can tell you, from my experience, is that old methods from the last decade are less and less effective. For instance, posting on Facebook has far less reach.

Moreover, Facebook, or its parent company Meta, is instituting new terms and conditions that not only strangle reach, but demand that Facebook page owners PAY if we wish to share more than two links a month. That sucks for sharing book reviews and recommendations.

Facebook is also making a grab not just for our content on Facebook itself, but for everything publish on our personal websites. Yes, this is mainly aimed at news organisations and other big media companies, but it catches little people like me as well. And yes, after enough people screamed about it, Facebook backed down, but the intent remains.

Add in that Facebook continually prompts me to use AI to write my posts and to have its AI reply to everyone and I’m outraged.

The result is that I won’t be resuming my weekly Facebook page posts. I will retain the page, so as to share the news when I have a new release, but that is all. I don’t like the feeling that we’re being exploited.

Sidenote: speaking of keeping up with my book releases…

If you follow this blog you’ll hear about them, but just to be sure, you can subscribe to my new releases only newsletter on my author website and/or follow me on Amazon by going to my Amazon author page and clicking follow.

I was listening to Adam Conover explain how YouTube encourages everyone to post content, but pays very few people the equivalent of a living wage. It makes me think that all of these social media companies profit by what I’m calling, at least to myself, the theft of thought. And what’s worse now is that their theft is feeding AI, which then produces slop that pushes out original thinking and content. It’s making full-time creatorship very hard.

I worry that for readers the avalanche of AI-generated books with their glossy marketability, but poor reading experience will disappoint so often that readers will choose other forms of entertainment. We cannot afford to lose readers.

Reading is a conversation between the author, with their experiences of life, and readers with their own unique experiences. The world opens up in new ways. However, that doesn’t happen until, as so many authors have said, the author first opens a vein and bleeds onto the page. Real emotion has to be the starting place. Because shared emotion, vulnerability, is the invitation to the reader to be vulnerable in turn.

Conversation, after all, is the communication of information coloured by emotion. A fact is a dry thing until someone tells the story of how it changes lives.

I don’t want to comment on the extent to which traditional publishers are using AI to initiate (identify market trends and craft book proposals to match), produce, and promote books. It does mean that, depending on the publisher, readers can’t rely on traditional publishing to have excluded the AI-generation of much of a book.

My recommendation, since we currently can’t be confident as to the extent to which a book is produced using AI, is that you trust your gut. If a book has multiple flaws (such as repetition, an incoherent or missing plot, cardboard characters that are inconsistent), or leaves you emotionally flat, then feel free not to finish it, but to try a different book, perhaps a different author, and never to give up the centuries-old pleasure of reading novels.

But back to the author side of this chaotic new world. Why continue to write fiction? Why give a year and more of my life to a book?

Because authors are revolutionaries.

Expectations and social norms have changed recently. The change started with social media and has accelerated as people employ AI agents.

Society now expects instant answers. Instant responses. An AI agent can provide these immediate replies, possibly inaccurately, but that’s a different issue.

Humans, especially a single human, like an independent author, can’t reply as swiftly. Thus, we fail to meet AI-enforced customer expectations.

But deeper and more troubling than the expectation of immediate gratification, of immediate attention, is the replacement of experience with performance, and in a broader sense, the replacement of encounter with sentimentality.

The first is simple to illustrate. An influencer, presented with a pretty cake, will carefully frame the situation for a photo opportunity; that is, rather than focus on consuming the cake, the influencer is focused on the performance of consuming the cake.

Performance contributes to status. Status isn’t a bad thing. It can be as simple as establishing that one belongs. Status: insider. Status: ambitious. Status: fake it till you make it!

But experience is how we grow, how we deepen our understanding of the world, and how way truly connect with others. Why trade that for empty performance? Answer: because we’re scared to be real.

The replacement of encountering others with merely sentimentalising them is an intensification of this performance replacing experience trend.

When you say “aww”, and don’t follow it up with an attempt at real connection, that “aww” is a sign of sentimentality; of refusing to encounter the other, and instead, framing them as an object rather than a person. This allows you to continue your life as planned, rather than embracing a detour that addresses the needs of the other.

Which is a long and complicated way of saying that much of human interaction is now superficial. That may always have been true, but now superficiality is valued over a true encounter. AI-measured and -enforced metrics ensure it. This is why people speak of gaming the system rather than of contributing to or challenging it, or of pursuing true value creation.

Writing a novel is one way of opposing this hollowing out of society. In a novel, the author can create and hold a safe space in which the reader can be real, and by real, I mean able to risk vulnerability. As readers, we allow ourselves to be open to the characters in the novel. We connect. Empathy is effortless.

A novel doesn’t have to be cozy to be a safe space. What it must do is respect the characters and world it offers, and respect the reader.

Even after so long thinking about these issues, talking about them still feels rough. These aren’t smooth ideas. We’re navigating a time of change and trying to build resilience (and a sustainable career) at the same time as others are trying to drain/exploit systems (like the publishing industry) for “profit”. (I say profit ironically since it feels more like theft).

To bring the discussion back to practicalities…

First, Ghosts Cry is delayed AGAIN. In explanation I’ll just say, this year has been a lot! Ghosts Cry will be out in 2027, but I’m not promising a firm release date yet. False Eve will be out in the second half of 2027. I am so sorry for the delay I could cry.

Second, my social media habits have changed. As I said earlier, I’m stepping away from Facebook. I am around on Bluesky, so I’m not completely inaccessible. More importantly, I’ll be resuming this blog on a monthly basis. I’ll post at the beginning of the month, probably on a Friday, leave comments open for 28 days, then close them just before the next post. Because of spam I have to manually review each comment. Unfortunately, that also slows discussion. But it’s worth it to create a safe space.

Third, I won’t be reviewing books any more. I will occasionally mention some I’m anticipating or enjoyed, but not as a regular commitment. I hate giving this up, but ::gestures at AI slop books, AI scam emails and comments, bots, AI scraping, rude people, and general life stuff:: I lack the time.

The monthly posts will start in January.

Re-reading this post, I’m rueful at how downbeat it sounds. I don’t feel that way! But being real is less sparkly than performative positivity for algorithmic optimisation.

Let’s end with something hopeful. What book (apart from poor, delayed Ghosts Cry) are you anticipating in 2027?

I have Storms of Fate by Anne Bishop on pre-order.

Jenny

PS You may (I’m a wicked tease) hear from me before January because I’m working on a novella which I hope to have out for Christmas. “Scrooge and the Gremlin (Not to Mention a Vampire Queen)”. Fingers crossed! The novella has a simple plot compared to Ghosts Cry, which has so many plot threads it requires intense focus.


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14 responses to “Writing in the Midst of Chaos”

  1. Shari Avatar
    Shari

    Please don’t get discouraged about your writing. I am so happy that you have planned a number of stories after Ghosts Cry. I have read almost every single book I have seen listed in Kindle and am hoping to see Ghosts Cry in early 2027. Love your stories.

    1. Jenny Schwartz Avatar

      Shari, thank you! I’m glad you’re enjoying my books, and all encouragement is very welcome. It’s been an overwhelming year, but I’m grateful writing continues to bring me joy and that I’ll have books actually out next year! Finally 😀

  2. Alison Smith Avatar
    Alison Smith

    Don’t worry, I agree that AI is a big concern. I’ve just been made redundant in favour of AI which is about as dispiriting as you imagine – and I’m an editor/proof reader. But please carry on writing! At the moment AI slop is identifiable and the deluge of AI fiction is nowhere close to reaching the quality of your books, which I love, incidentally. So thank you, and knowing Ghosts Cry will be here in 2027 gives me something good to look forward to.

    1. Jenny Schwartz Avatar

      Alison, the rage that just exploded hearing of your AI redundancy! 🤬 I am so sorry. Thank you for taking the time to offer me encouragement while dealing with your own AI nightmare. Blast it all! We will persevere!

  3. robbiemeeksRobbie Avatar

    I have thoroughly enjoyed the insights into the Caldryn Universe that I find on the Caldryn website. I especially like the deeper peek into the characters and how they relate to each other and the story. My imagination weaves such a vivid picture as I am reading this story thanks to your description of the places and the maps of the layout. The art you choose is also very helpful as I picture each resident as I sink into the story. I find myself wishing every author would make a companion website like this for their stories. ❤️ You continue to excel. Keep fighting the good fight, knowing that the world is full of real people who respect our intellect too much to read drivel and refuse to accept fakes no matter how slick the packaging. Take all the time you need. We will wait.

    1. Jenny Schwartz Avatar

      Thanks, Robbie ☺️ One of the things I missed this year was adding to the website. There’s so much about Forum City to explore. It won’t all fit in the books, so I’d hoped to have Forum City News items on the website. Maybe next year! I love that the characters are engaging for you, too. I just love them to bits as they reveal new aspects – new even to me!

  4. Sarah Avatar
    Sarah

    As a reader, I say take all the time that you need for Ghosts Cry to do the story justice. I’m enjoying the series so much with its great main character, world building, plots, and your sharp observations about workplace dynamics. We’ve all read good series where at some point the author clearly started rushing through new books (due to economic pressures?) to the detriment of the reading experience. This is a special series so I’m grateful that you’re taking the time it needs!

    1. Jenny Schwartz Avatar

      Sarah, that’s such a kind way to look at my delay. But it’s true. I want so much more for Ghosts Cry then rushing to write The End.

  5. amithi Avatar

    I am so happy to read your updates again! Your insights are always interesting and give me food for thought.

    Last month I read my first book suspected by others of being written with the help of AI. I knew something was wrong (I just thought the author was inexperienced and needed an editor in the worst way) and after DNFing I went back to the comments and read what others thought… I picked up the book because of a pretty cover on my Goodreads recommendations and an interesting blurb – I still think it could have been an awesome story, the bones were there.
    I was so frustrated that for nearly 6 weeks I exclusively reread beloved books from my teenage and YA years – no risk of AI involvement there.
    I’m going back to recommendations from family, friends and a few select online sources like booktube and newsletters / blogs from authors I enjoy. Needless to say that I wish you would reconsider recommending… but I understand that that is not a priority.

    As for Ghosts Cry, yes, I’m disappointed, but still – I’m looking forward to whatever you decide you can give us. I am never going to give up on beloved series. And in the meantime there are always rereads.

    Take care of yourself first and foremost.

    1. Jenny Schwartz Avatar

      I’m relieved my rambling thoughts aren’t annoying! And thanks for the kind words re Ghosts Cry.

      I’ve had the same experience with an amazing looking book that ended up being utter rubbish. The sense of betrayal was acute. Like you, I’m retreating often into rereads. Being a new author trying to get established these days must be awful.

  6. Cynthia Stone Avatar
    Cynthia Stone

    Books I’m looking forward to in 2027, besides yours, Roverpowered 7, Hot Ticket (Traffic Warden Mysteries), Shieldborn (T Kingfisher), Body Refinement in a Beast Tamer’s World 4, and the next Linzi Day, Martha Wells, and Victoria Goddard books. I buy your books because I enjoy rereading them. I try to avoid AMZ as much as I can because although they introduced me to many new favorite authors, including you, commercial monoliths aren’t good for us in the long run. I support libraries and my local bookstore first, then Kobo and Libro, whenever possible. I do use AMZ to alert me to new books by authors I follow, Bookbub too. I also am not a fan of AI. Especially not for creative arts as it’s not capable of those.

    1. Jenny Schwartz Avatar

      Ooh! I didn’t know Roverpowered had book 7 soon to come. I might need to reread Drew Hayes’ Superpowered series as well.

      The fact that Amazon now let’s me include my ebooks in Libby and Hoopla as well as Kindle Unlimited is a relief. Baby steps to escaping Amazon’s stranglehold.

  7. Linda miller Avatar
    Linda miller

    Your books are so worth the wait and we will be patient. Certainly am finding more and more books that smack of AI and they are stupid! Stay strong! We need your writing in our lives.

    1. Jenny Schwartz Avatar

      Linda, I’m overwhelmed how kind everyone is being regarding another delay in the release of Ghosts Cry. Thank you! Strangely, I think AI and its half-baked, fast production mode may be making us all more appreciative of a slower pace, more nuanced and humanly imperfect interaction.

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